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范文示例

Introduction

Rephrase the  topic

The  effects of advertising on the young have been the subject of sociologicalstudies (社会学研究) for  decades.

Attitude and  personal opinion

While  the results often differ depending on the nature of the study done, there is overwhelming evidence  (大量证据) that  advertising has a  profound impact on (有着深远的影响)  young, impressionable  (adj. 敏感的)  minds.

 

译文:

转述话题

几十年来,广告对年轻人的影响一直是社会学研究的主题。

立场和个人观点

尽管研究结果往往因其特性而有所差异,但大量证据表明,广告对年轻人敏感的思想有深远的影响。

 

Body paragraph 1

Idea A

Children  are vulnerable  creatures (脆弱的生物), susceptible  to malign influences (容易受到恶性影响) from the world  around them.

Reason

(Why)

In  that sense, advertising which makes false promises (做出虚假承诺) or manipulates children’s emotions (操纵儿童情绪) to  sell products is apparently bad forthe young target audience (年轻目标受众).

Explain

(Example)

Children  who witness advertisements selling toys may feel insecure and alienated (感到不安全和被疏远) if  they do not own such toys, especially if the advertisement claims that  ownership of the said items enhances popularity among friends (更受朋友欢迎), for  example.

Detail

(Result of  the example)

As  a result, they could simply badger their parents to (吵着父母要…)  buy these toys; If not, the desire for toys would creep into their minds (潜入他们的思想) and  thus affecting their behaviour.

Conclusion

Accordingly,  advertising can have a negative impact on a child’s well-being(n.健康) and behaviour.

 

译文:

观点A

儿童是脆弱的生物,容易受到周围世界的恶性影响。

解释观点

(理由)

从这个意义上说,做出虚假承诺或操纵儿童情绪来推销产品的广告显然对年轻目标受众不利。

进一步解释或例子

看到玩具广告的孩子们,如果自己没有这钟玩具,他们可能会感到不安全和被疏远,尤其是广告宣传说这些玩具可以让他们更受朋友欢迎。

细节或例子的结果

结果是他们会直接向父母吵着要买这些玩具;如未果,其对玩具的渴望会潜入他们的思想,从而影响行为。

结论

据此,广告会对孩子的健康和行为产生负面影响。

 

Body paragraph 2

Idea B

+ Reason

(Why)

Nonetheless, children are consumers too and it is necessary for companies and brands  to reach their target audience, as one of the keys function of advertising is  to helps companies to tell customers about their products and maximise the profit (使利润最大化).

Explain

(Example)

Unless companies selling products to the young are able to advertise to their consumers (向消费者做广告), their profits will be affected and  employees will lose their jobs.

Detail

(Result of  the example)

This will have broader  ramifications for(产生更广泛的影响) the economy and will  negatively affect growth and employment  levels.

Conclusion

This means advertising to the young is necessary to some  extent.

 

译文:

观点B

+

解释观点

(理由)

尽管如此,儿童也是消费者,公司和品牌需要接触他们的目标受众,因为广告的关键功能之一是帮助公司向客户介绍他们的产品,并使利润最大化。

进一步解释或例子

向年轻人销售产品的公司需要向消费者做广告,否则公司利润会受影响,员工将失业。

细节或例子的结果

这将对经济发展产生更广泛影响,对经济增长和就业水平产生负面影响。

结论

这意味着在某种程度上向年轻人做广告是必要的。

 

Conclusion

Summarizing  the main point

To conclude, while I believe it is crucial for advertisers to target children  and young people, companies must do so in a responsible manner.

Suggestion

To that end, advertising that makes false claims (虚假宣传) or  may affect the well-being of children must be  stopped through regulations. Any organisations which breach these regulations (违反这些规定) must face legal scrutiny(接受法律审查) and  ultimately account for their actions through the courts.

 

译文:

总结主要观点

综上所述,尽管我认为广告商瞄准儿童和年轻人受众至关重要,但企业必须对此负责。

建议

为此,必须通过法规停播存在虚假宣传或可能影响儿童健康的广告。任何违反这些规定的组织都必须接受法律审查,并最终在法庭上做出解释。

 

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词汇累积

sociological  studies

社会学研究

overwhelming evidence

大量证据

have a profound impact on…

有着深远的影响

impressionable

adj. 敏感的

vulnerable creatures

脆弱的生物

susceptible to malign influences

容易受到恶性影响

make false promises

做出虚假承诺

manipulate children’s emotions

操纵儿童情绪

the young target audience

年轻目标受众

feel insecure and alienated

感到不安全和被疏远

enhance popularity among friends

更受朋友欢迎

badger their parents to

吵着父母要

creep into their minds

潜入他们的思想

well-being

n. 健康

maximise the profit

使利润最大化

advertise to their consumers

向消费者做广告

have broader ramifications for…

产生更广泛的影响

makes false claims

虚假宣传

breach these regulations

违反这些规定

face legal scrutiny

接受法律审查


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